Write Powerful College Essays

Write Powerful College Essays

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Offered by Jared B.

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USC Finance Grad | Ex-Investment Banker | College Admissions Strategist

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Admissions Committee at USC Marshall School of Business

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Admissions Committee at Credit Suisse

Package Description:

This package is designed for college applicants aiming to craft exceptional essays that maximize their chances of admission. This package includes the following, but feel free to adapt based on your unique situation and goals: - Initial Kickoff and Planning Session: Begin with an in-depth kickoff session with your coach to discuss your background, goals, experiences, and aspirations. This session sets the stage for creating compelling college essays. - Application Strategy: Collaborate with your coach to identify your unique points of differentiation as an applicant and strategize the best ways to highlight these in your essays. - Essay Brainstorming: Dive deep into your background and experiences with your coach to uncover themes, perspectives, and qualities that set you apart. Together, you’ll explore various narratives to ensure your essays capture your true essence. - Essay Crafting: Work with your coach to craft powerful narratives rooted in your unique story that help the admissions committee understand why you would be a valuable addition to their campus. - Essay Editing: After developing your essays' narratives, your coach will provide thorough editing and feedback, refining each draft until the essays are polished and ready for submission. Multiple rounds of edits ensure the final products are perfect. To summarize, this package pairs you with a world-class coach who will guide you through every step of creating standout college essays. They will offer honest and constructive feedback, ensuring your essays showcase your strengths and individuality.


What you'll get from this package

Compelling essays that are differentiated, personalized, and thoughtful — tailored to each school you decide to apply to

A deeper understanding of who you are, what impact you plan to have on the world, and why schools should care

An outline and several drafts of essays that get you closer to the final polished version that will stand out to admissions teams


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Additional expectations or terms of engagement may be provided by coaches (e.g. expected response times, etc.).

Services included:

Editing

Application Strategy

Essays


Jared B.

Offered by Jared B.

Joined May 2025

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USC Finance Grad | Ex-Investment Banker | College Admissions Strategist

As a USC Marshall School of Business graduate and former investment banking analyst at a top Wall Street firm, I know what it takes to stand out in a competitive admissions process. I’ve been on both sides of the table — not only as an applicant who earned offers from top programs, but also as someone who’s evaluated talent firsthand while serving on my firm’s campus recruiting team. I understand what decision-makers look for and how to present your story in a way that resonates. What sets me apart is my ability to blend storytelling with strategy. I draw on my background in finance and mentorship to help students highlight leadership, impact, and growth with clarity and confidence. Whether you're targeting a top business school or looking to craft a differentiated application, I’ll help you build a clear game plan and bring out the most compelling, authentic version of your story.

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