Polish & Pitch: One Statement

Polish & Pitch: One Statement

5.0

Offered by Lily M.

5.0

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Law School Admissions Coach | Multiple T14 Admit | Writing Expert

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Studied at UC Berkeley School of Law

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Works at City and County of San Francisco

Package Description:

Your stats may open the door, but it's your essays that shape how you're remembered. In a process where clarity, voice, and purpose matter deeply, ensuring your story is both compelling and concise is essential. This package offers comprehensive editing for one essay of any type to help you make every word count. Content Editing & Narrative Strategy I begin with a close read of your draft, looking beyond grammar and style to the heart of your statement. You'll receive in-depth feedback on structure, clarity, flow, and thematic cohesion. I’ll challenge you to deepen reflection, refine your story arc, and ensure your statement fully captures your voice, goals, and unique perspective. Copy Editing & Line-Level Refinement Once the content is solid, I focus on the details that make your writing stronger. I provide meticulous edits to improve sentence structure, eliminate redundancy, clarify transitions, and ensure tone, grammar, and style are polished and professional. Follow-Up Conversations After edits are delivered, you’ll have the opportunity to schedule a follow-up conversation to talk through feedback, clarify suggestions, and fine-tune your revisions.


What you'll get from this package

Well-written, strong individual statements


Additional details

Coaching delivered via live sessions and .

Refund Policy

Services included:

CAS Application Edit

Essays


Lily M.

Offered by Lily M.

Joined June 2025

5.0

Law School Admissions Coach | Multiple T14 Admit | Writing Expert

Hello and welcome to my profile! I’m a rising 1L at UC Berkeley School of Law, attending with a significant merit scholarship. During the admissions cycle, I was honored to be accepted to half of the T14 and received hundreds of thousands of dollars in scholarship offers from top law schools. With a strong academic foundation in political science and environmental studies from UC Berkeley, I bring a unique and strategic perspective to law school admissions coaching. My professional experience in communications and government has shaped me into a strong idea generator, writer, and editor. These skills are critical for crafting standout applications. Whether you need help with personal statements, interview preparation, or overall application strategy, I’m here to help you navigate the path to your dream law school. Let’s connect and bring your law school goals to life!

$79

1h of coaching

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